The Pen is Mightier: Timothy Barr ’12C Wins AIV Writing Competition

February 06, 2012

It’s rare to find a student who can eloquently write about complex political subjects. That’s what makes St. John’s University Senior Timothy Barr ’12C so unique. 

This English and Rhetoric double major recently won the first-ever Alumni Insider’s View…Student Writing Competition, receiving a $3,000 cash prize.  Sponsored by the Washington, DC Alumni Chapter, this contest challenged students to write a well-researched academic paper based on the following topic: “Excluding national defense and homeland security, discuss three areas of our Federal Republic where the federal government should become more involved and, conversely, three areas where it should become less involved.”

Barr appreciated the opportunity to write a paper on such an important issue.

“I think that there is a prevailing sense in my generation that is apolitical and kind of cynical,” he said.  “But here in the academy, we are allowed the space and time to pause, and to have that kind of privilege also entails a responsibility: a responsibility to reflect. So even if it doesn’t lead to radical change, even if it’s hard to believe that we’ll one day create a utopia, it’s important that we preserve the practices of reflection and deliberation at a time when perhaps that isn’t as valued in the political sphere.”

Barr’s essay features a remarkable level of depth, exploring a wide range of issues and conveying them in accessible terms. In the paper, he argues that the U.S. government should become more involved in the pharmaceutical industry, set higher standards for political media and provide additional funding for the arts; he also asserts that the government should disentangle itself from agricultural subsidies and play a lesser role in public education.

The AIV…Student Writing Competition was judged by a Special University Academic Committee, consisting of professors and administrators from various fields. Dr. Robert F. Pecorella, Associate Professor of Government and Politics, served on this committee and was very impressed with Barr’s essay. In particular, he commended the paper for its attempts at solving such significant issues.

“Addressing directly the problem of excessive partisanship at the national level, the paper did a nice job of analyzing various policy concerns within the structure of American federalism,” he observed. “And [the paper] offered a useful ‘pragmatic framework’ for deciding which level of government was best suited to deal with which policy matters. The arguments were well made, the paper was well written and the award was much deserved.” 

A native of Upper Darby, PA, Barr has certainly made the most of his time at St. John’s. He is a standout member of the St. John’s Debate Society, studied abroad in Europe for one semester and has worked at the Writing Center on the Queens campus.

“I applied to St. John’s sort of on a whim,” Barr recalled. “But after I applied, I looked more closely at it and I noticed the Vincentian values. I was attracted to both that and the diversity of the University. Four years later, I’ve become friends with foreign students from all over the world, allowing me to hear points of view from countries that I didn’t even know existed. That may be the greatest part of my St. John’s education.”

Barr is unsure of his plans after graduation, but he is considering graduate school in Rhetoric. No matter what he decides to pursue, this promising St. John’s student knows he’ll be well prepared thanks to his undergraduate years.

“I’m very thankful to St. John’s, particularly right now for this essay contest since it helped to pay my rent,” he joked. “But seriously, I thank St. John’s for giving me an education that encourages me to question everything, to not let anything remain obvious. And I think that’s precisely what we need for the future.”