2nd International Writing and Critical Thinking Conference

In November 2008 seven St. John's University faculty presented on a panel at the Second International Writing and Critical Thinking Conference, Quinnipiac University. The panel, titled "Intermediate Outcomes of the Rome Experience From Six Faculty Across the Disciplines and the WAC Director," was given within a session titled "Thinking and Writing Abroad to Strengthen Thinking and Writing Across Campus."

Speaker 1: James Benson, Vice Provost, Dean of Information Resources and Libraries, and Associate Professor, Library and Information Science, St. John’s College

Returning to full-time teaching next year. I plan to propose a modification of our MLS curriculum to make it communication intensive. I am examining writing practices in discipline & department to develop the proposal. In my previous full-time teaching life, I always felt ineffective in assisting students with their writing. I am now learning how to provide more effective feedback on student papers.

When I next teach I will have students in a college & university library management class posting written essays to a wiki on a tri- weekly writing cycle. The ten to fifteen students in the class will chose a specific topic about which each will write a short (400-500 word) essay.
The essay topic list will be based on my enumeration of major research themes in the literatures of academic libraries, higher education, & scholarly communication. For each writing cycle, students will also revise at least two other student's essays. The purpose of this process is to teach collaborative writing, using topic taxonomies, recursive editing, & committee built segues among the topics. For the final writing cycle, student groups will collaboratively assemble related topical essays into a larger thematic work.

The Writing Cycle Process:

Each student will post their drafts and self-critiques of their drafts on the individual student's wiki page. Other students will post peer feedback. I will then post my comments on the drafts directly to the student’s wiki page. As a result, students will a continuing set of their versions [including notes and ideas] and feedback, all in a repository. At the end of the course, the student groups can draw from the repository to write final versions and individual reflections about their writing and learning in the class. Students will see everyone’s work. This process will allow students to see how the project can generate varying types of essays, see the instructor’s reactions to different work on the same project, and observe other students’ responses to a variety of writing examples.

Presentation Assignment

Students will also present one topic to the class and receive peer feedback. They subsequently will make an audio recording of their presentation as a voice over coupled to a set of power point slides outlining the presentation.

Speaker 2: Andrea J. Bergman, Associate Professor, Department of Psychology, St. John’s College

"The Use of a Reading Journal: Linking Writing with Learning to Read"

One assignment for my abnormal psychology class this semester is a reading journal.  This was done as an attempt to have students become more thoughtful about the material that they are reading through their writing.  Each student is required to post comments for each chapter of the textbook.  These comments can include reactions, questions, criticisms, and reflections on the material that they read.  This is done on Blackboard/WebCT and an unexpected benefit of this assignment is that students are reading each others' comments and then posting comments on the comments.  This has created an on-line academic environment that, I believe, has enhanced the learning of the course material.

Speaker 3: Frank Cantelmo, Associate Professor, Department of Biology, St. John’s College

"Workshopping to Practice Scientific Terms"

I am using workshops in my honors scientific inquiry course to support introductory science students as they: 1) learn and practice identifying scientific concepts and terminology; 2) read and critique the content, method and writing of popular science articles in newspapers and magazines; and, 3) summarize the published articles to reveal how the articles illustrate or integrate scientific concepts and terminology.  I choose draft student summaries representative of the successes and struggles of the entire class and provide all the students with these summaries and the original science articles summarized.  Working together across four class periods, students first read the original articles, considering them with questions like: “Who is doing the science and what are they doing?” and “What scientific terminology can we tease out of this article?” to imagine together why and how they might summarize these articles and tease out the terminology. Then, students workshop the summaries written by their peers for what they are and aren’t doing well – in summary and in identifying concepts and terminology present in that article – and discuss how and why the summaries could be strengthened.  The open classroom conversation of science and writing about science allows me to reiterate lessons of content. 

Speaker 4: Maura Flannery, Professor, Computer Science, Mathematics and Science, College of Professional Studies

I have two roles on campus, professor of biology and director of our Center for Teaching and Learning (CTL) both roles have been influenced by my experience in Rome.  In terms of teaching, I am much more aware of the link between reading and writing.  Several times, I have asked students to write about their reading assignments in class.  These are short exercises, but they have been very illuminating for me, and they have sent the message to students that I take the reading seriously.  I have also used this type of exercise more formally to assess their comprehension of basic concepts, and I find myself being more thoughtful in my responses to their essay papers, assignments which I've used for several years.  In CTL workshops, I am using many of the techniques that the writing instructors used during the week in Rome.  I learned a great deal about getting faculty to work collaboratively.

Speaker 5: Anne Ellen Geller, Associate Professor, English, St. John’s College, Director, Writing Across the Curriculum, Institute for Writing Studies

This year the Writing Across the Curriculum program has asked the faculty who participated in the Summer Faculty Writing Institute in Rome to describe their experiences and their intermediate outcomes (course based, departmental, etc.) to faculty colleagues at writing across the curriculum lunches.  We have titled these lunches: “Lessons, Experiences, and New Ideas from Faculty Colleagues.”  What has been striking about these informal presentations is how faculty from across the disciplines have responded – with amazement at the way students in their colleagues’ classes have engaged in informal, online and in-class writing, with respect for their colleagues as learners and risk-takers, and with gratitude for the generous way their colleagues are letting them into their classrooms and their teaching.

Speaker 6: Carolyn Vigorito, Associate Professor, Department of Psychology, St. John’s College

"The Use of Online Peer-to-Peer Discussion Posts to Promote Writing to Learn"

This semester I have students in a child psychology class posting written responses to a weekly online discussion topic related to course readings. The forty students in the class were randomly divided into smaller groups of ten students each for their online discussions. They were required to post their own response to the topic question and to respond to at least 2 members of their online group each week. Twice during the semester, students were required to visit the Writing Center and in conjunction with a writing tutor they were to select their three strongest posts and three weakest posts. In addition, they wrote a reflection essay on why they thought the written posts they chose were weak or strong. In their essays, students commented that this was a worthwhile exercise that benefited their own development as writers.

Speaker 7: May Webber, Chair, Division of Humanities, Associate Professor of Philosophy, College of Professional Studies

The normative side to my ethics courses includes student participation in a discussion group wherein it is the student’s responsibility to argue either the pro or con side to a moral issue. Preparation involves writing a paper defending the position he/she intends to argue. This semester I tried incorporating both “peer review’ and “professorial review” into this process. Students had the benefit of having a rough draft of their papers critiqued by both their peers and me. The final draft was due at the end of class the day the student’s group presented.