Level 2

Objectives 
Addresses AssignmentPartially addresses assignment.
ClaimPresents a somewhat defined claim.
OrganizationOrganization is inconsistent.
Evidence & ResearchResearch and evidence support claim only partially.
StyleStyle barely appropriate to assignment.
AudiencePartially addresses intended audience.
Grammar & UsageInconsistently correct grammar and mechanics.
RevisionLittle evidence of revision and proofreading.